FoxWing's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Happy Death Day]

This was simply adorable. I went into this expecting some sort of parody of the 2017 slasher flick by the same name, but finding an original cartoon that's a throwback to the Max Fleischer era was certainly a pleasant surprise, especially with the catchy music and rhythmic character movements. I certainly hope you do a lot more with Fiona and Fido.

DelusionalGinger responds:

Oh lordy, I knew that name sounded familiar. Next time I'm definitely putting more research into a title...
Thank you so very much, I'm glad you enjoyed it!! I'm looking to do some more small projects to get a better handle on movement, but I have definitely been thinking about coming back to these two sometime in the future.

["Gun Fun" Animatic - A student work]

This is really solid work for a WIP. Personally, I feel that it plays out more like a storyboard reel than a proper animatic, but what you've got so far is adorable. The character designs are distinct, recognizable, and simple enough to be perfectly suited for animation. I especially enjoyed the music and the coffee owl gags bookending the short, but I feel you could probably do more with it, like knocking back the coffee or a more exaggerated jolt when the lady's gun goes off. All if all, I can't wait to see it finished.

DatCakeIzEhPai responds:

Thank you very much for the feedback on the coffee and the jolt. It is nice that you notice it as a storyboard and the details. Unfortunately, I won't be finishing this animatic into a full animation due to a huge load of student works. By far, this is a study of me understanding the basic of visual storytelling and timing. In future, I think I could make it better if pressure dies down. Thank you again for the feedback and glad that you like it!